Teacher notes
To improve:
Increase the amount of footage in the montage sequence. The montage on the landscape
Michael winterbottom every day
Dont like the candle
Not sure if the letter close up is to clumsy for the scene
Iconography to children is throughout so it would be better if it is a child at the end.
Research Michael winterbottom-draw the inspirations
Graded at a B
Good annotation for each draft p
Good discussions keek
Good discussion
Good deal beach and photographs
Film
The seascape was good in terms of montage
Slow zoom
Use of tension clock
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