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7 Draft:

The beginning needs to be cut or changed, cut it from later on in the sequence

The whooshing sound detract from the narrative and feel of the film. The sound should enhance not detract.

Lack of sound at 4:38

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Remember the title of the film and how does the review change this. Change it to a specific month. 

Change the review image, to a better framed image. Find a better. An image that is more about the genre of the film

Draft 7

Evaluation
After re-watching this edit I noticed that there are some dropped frames throughout. Also there are issues with the non-diegetic sound near the end as it seems to randomly play. The man walking at the end of the sequence needs to be removed as the build up to this part has been taken out, so he doesn't fit into the narrative anymore. This also means that the sound of the car needs to be taken out and it should end on the funeral letter. Although I think that this letter should zoom in not out.

Review

Final Poster - After Feedback

Review

Final Draft of poster and facebook feedback

Feedback on the Poster from Facebook

Reviews comparison

 

The only difference between these two is the image. This is to see the difference between taking the image used for the poster and comparing it to an image taken from the film. The poster image will work because it is an image that is connected to the film, however other reviews like Empire Charlie St Cloud shows an image of the actors face. So I am going to use the second review to fit with industry design.