Draft 7

Evaluation
After re-watching this edit I noticed that there are some dropped frames throughout. Also there are issues with the non-diegetic sound near the end as it seems to randomly play. The man walking at the end of the sequence needs to be removed as the build up to this part has been taken out, so he doesn't fit into the narrative anymore. This also means that the sound of the car needs to be taken out and it should end on the funeral letter. Although I think that this letter should zoom in not out.