Draft 10

This is a later draft of the film, however there are some minor issues. The first is the opening credits; where the credits read 'Mickey' it should read 'Michael Dearsley'. This is because it is more professional to have a full name, the shortening was used earlier as a place holder to make it easier to edit. Another part I want to change is near the end where it cross cuts between the character in present day and the other character walking out; here I think that the non-diagetic sound used throughout should run over quietly to the reality sequence. This will make the sound transitions less jaded and cumbersome.