Consistent font - the opening font for the credits do not fit the genre and the title. I will also have to change the font on the poster to make it consistent throughout the production
Change the fast zoom at the beggining
Look at actual credits no camera/director
Using the same or similar sound to create a difference between the flashbacks and the real world.
Re-film the ending to finish/connect the narrative
The footage on the beach is realistic links to Loach and Arnold in its observation style.
The flashback 'light' is too disconcerting and dark.
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