Flashback scene 1

This is an editing version of footage shot at the beach scene for the flashback. It is set when the two brothers where children and is going to be started when the main character sees a pebble on the table. I like the shots used in the sequence but I would like to re-edit some aspects of the flashback. This may need to be shorted so I may cut out the opening shot as it wont be needed, I would also like to edit it with higher exposure so it looks more dreamlike, as it is a good memory. The music that will be played over the top will be the first piece of piano music. I would also like to enhance the sounds of there movements and add in children laughter.
I do like the shallow depth of field as I think it is very dream like, an aspect and technique I learnt from 'Eden'