Music 2

The first sample of the main theme that will run thoughout the film written for us by Helen, the piece is not yet in minor key so it will  be used in the dreams/flashback sequences to make them less tense. The music has to increase in tension per sequence as the tension of each sequence will increase. I want the piece to be in D-minor to make the scenes more dramatic

Ideas for flashbacks

The Flashbacks should increase in tension as they happen, so the first beach sequence should be slower and softer than the later sequences. This means that the music should be similar to the feel of the cinematography and should be faster
Beach Sequence:
Narrative:
Enters the flahsback from the signt of the pebble


Basketball scene:
Narrative:
Enters the Flashback with Marc hitting a basketball off a table. The last one and thus is the one when they are the oldest. This is going to be set after the death of their parents (the only one that is) and as they are playing basketball they are confronted by 'bullies' who in some way mention their parents. This is where the older brother 'punches' the others. We then cut away on the landing of the punch to the basketball.

Cinematography and Edit:
I want to sue close ups of the mian character 'Marc' during the argument. While the 'bullies' shout at the two brothers we never see their faces or the older brothers. We only hear from 'Marc's' perspective. The cuts should be fast paced during the scene and the feel should be slightly uncomfortable and nightmarish. The sequence should end on a mid/close of the ball bouncing, this bouncing should be a piece of pictoral editing to the same shot within the house after 'Marc' hits the basketball off the table (the opening to the flashback)

Location shoot Park

The location shots of the park where the second flashback takes place. This flashback is when they are younger and are children. 

The flashback to when they are kids will be focused around the swings as they will show  the family together

The slight angle of this shot is good to show the brothers together, if we aren't going to show the brothers face then we will have to angle it better

This angle is very interesting in the it will show one of the characters blocking the other from view.

I don't think that we should focus on the other side of the park as I think that making the two brothers look close is going to be on the swings

Locations Deal Beach

Shots taken at Deal beach for the first flashback to the main characters life with his brother. This memory is created by a pebble on the table 

This panaramic shot shows the entire beach, which I want to shoot at the edge to make it seem closer

I like the shallow depth of field of the pebbles in the foreground, this will make it seem closer. 

The aspect of the beach I like is that it has long outsreched and seemingly endless landscapes. Which can sit behind the characters in the shot, making them look more visually interesting.

The bright over-exposedness of the sun in the sky is something of I want to be in the flashback. More accuratly I want to end the scene by building the light in the sun until it is massivly over exposed and completely white oyuts the screen

The contrast between the darkness of the trees because they are light from behind.

For all of the flashbacks I want to make them bright and over exposed

StoryBoard Draft 2

Story Board Draft 2

I am going to need to add the extra flashback scenes which are

1. Seaside (younger)
2. Park (younger)
3. Park (older
4. BasketBall (Older) (People pick a fight with the older brother)